Revisions

I did not do many changes from my rough draft to my final draft. The main problems were not writing the paper as long as it had to be and also the spelling, punctuations and using past or present. After doing my final draft I was able to identify my pattern of errors which are misspelling words and punctuations. What guided me to revise my paper was considering the suggestions my peer was able to find, also after rereading the paper a few more times helped me find my mistakes. I believe that my strongest point in the essay is the beginning and my weakest point is in the body of my essay.